I dont care about what we talk about
I dont care about who we talk about
But can we please just talk
I want to talk about the mole on your cheek
I want to talk about your first kiss
But all I really want to do is talk to you.
We could talk about how the Eiffel tower looks under a full moon
We could talk about how Beautiful your eyes look under a full moon
Lets talk about how many times in this poem I've already said "talk"
Lets talk about how I've said "talk" 14 times and how its getting so repetitive Im thinking about changing the entire poem
All I want to do with you is talk
I can talk about how beautiful you are
You can talk about... anything...
Feels like you're writing about someone specific and whether that's true or not, it's beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThis feels real. "Can you and I just please take a moment right now to talk" - great opening.
ReplyDeleteThis is gorgeous. I'll definitely keep reading.
ReplyDeleteI love this so much because I can see this all playing out in my head. Like the inside thoughts of the first person point of view. It's amazing.
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful!!! I definitely want to talk to you :)
ReplyDeleteTalking is good! .....Except when you're charged for minutes
ReplyDeletethe shins!!
ReplyDeleteI love this very much.
ReplyDeletelove love love
ReplyDeleteI loved this so much. I love how genuine and real this sounds and feels. So good!
ReplyDeletekillin it
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